Letter And Response Form For Construction Management

This is one of my favorite success stories. Jon Bartoshek worked for Safeway for 13 years driving a semi. A back injury prevented his continuing. He showed up in my office wanting to "go into construction management." It seemed impossible, but we looked into his background. Thirteen years earlier, Jon had owned a small tenant-finish construction company, the kind that builds out offices in leased space.

We took his construction experience and made it look "great big" on paper. We deleted the truck driving experience altogether and came up with two marketing tools (not resumes).

Then Jon said, "By the way, I'd really like to relocate to Houston." (He was in Denver at the time.) We wrote a marketing letter, designed a reply form, gathered the names of commercial construction firms in Houston, and sent off a mailing.

Jon got three positive responses, took three interviews, accepted a job offer, and relocated his family to Houston. Since then he has relocated four times, and today he is project superintendent for construction of the newest and largest hotel in Miami Beach. Who says you can't change careers?
JON B. BARTOSHEK
593 South Cole Street | Morrison, Colorado 80465
H: 303-463-8326 | C: 303-466-8125 | jbartoshek@gmail.com


March 15, 20––

Mr. Lawrence A. Wilson
President
HCB Contractors
4600 National Bank Building
Dallas, Texas 75202

Dear Mr. Wilson:

I am moving my family to Houston in the very near future and am seeking a entry-level construction management job.

The enclosed material helps to explain what I can do for you and shows why you might want to hire me.

To answer, please return the enclosed response letter (postage is paid) or call me in the evenings at the above number.

Sincerely,

Jon B. Bartoshek

Enclosures



FROM:
Jon B. Bartoshek
593 South Cole Street
Morrison, Colorado 80465

TO:
Mr. Lawrence A. Wilson
President
HCB Contractors
4600 National Bank Building
Dallas, Texas 75202

REPLY LETTER
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